Being a student at UCF and walking around campus, there is one thing in particular that frustrates and concerns me. This frustration involves people using other modes of transportation other than their feet to make their way through and around campus. Not only is this dangerous to themselves, but it is dangerous to the other students as well as pedestrians around them. My first few weeks being at UCF it didn’t aggravate me, but the longer I have been attending school and the more incidents I have had, the more it begins to frustrate me on a daily basis. From my standpoint, every student needs to get from class to class; why don’t we take proper precaution in being safe and use our feet in the way they were intended to be used. Unless we as a University choose to do something about it, I believe that this situation is only going to get worse as UCF becomes more crowded. This inclination not only puts innocent pedestrians at risk, but shows the evolving fast – paced lifestyles of the American culture. The first mode of transportation that frustrates me on campus is the bicycle. While the rest of the students are walking casually at 5 to 6 miles per hour {around 10 if we’re late}, the students riding bikes can easily hit 20 miles per hour. Besides the fact that they’re whizzing by students and pedestrians at an alarming speed, they are also causing even more congestion then we already have on campus. As bicycles may be a very enjoyable, healthy and fun activity or exercise to do, I don’t believe that there is a large amount of room for them on campus. For example, last week while I was walking to class along the breeze way, I was almost crushed by a two companion bicyclist speeding down the walkway. I was fortunate to be paying close attention and quickly move out the way. For the students who are listening to their iPods while walking around campus, this can make them more prone to getting into an accident. Students using bicycles can be hazardous even though it is probably one of the most maneuverable modes of transportation there is. Following the bike in a very close second, are the students who use skateboards or long boards around UCF. Even though they do not take up as much room as a bicycle, they can hit very high speeds and can easily injure an innocent student if they lose their balance. Without stereotyping, it seems that the “free spirits” with the care – free mind-set are the ones riding these contraptions. With this attitude and blatant disrespect for the students and pedestrians walking around campus, there are numerous incidents just waiting to happen. Unlike the bicycle, which can easily be locked to a tree or bike rack; skateboards are forced to be carried around campus blocking the already congested classrooms and hallways. Another fad about the skateboard is the fact that most of the riders are inexperienced and can easily hurt themselves as well as others. Considering the danger of this transportation to a pedestrian or student around an experienced rider, the numbers must increase drastically around an inexperienced one. The campus is already extremely over crowded as it is, but with the skateboards and even longer, less maneuverable long boards, it is only increasing congestion and putting everyone in danger. As a student I have had to walk in a 500 person classroom trying to climb over peoples laps with skateboards / long boards in front of them, which it is neither easy nor pleasant to do. The most understandable and less dangerous mode of transportation is rollerblades. Even though you can hit an extremely high rate of speed, they seem to be the most maneuverable. Due to the fact that they could be a lot more of a burden to take off and on, I can see why they are less likely to be used; which could be why I find them less of a nuisance. However, it is still dangerous to travel using this mode of transportation. An explanation to why it could be even more endangering to themselves and others students is because of the freedom they might feel on while on them. Instead of lugging around a 40 pound bicycle or a clumsy skateboard; rollerbladers are traveling using the relative same motion as a person walking. Students given this freedom of using rollerblades might be more opportune to take more risks such as flying by students and pedestrians or head into close knit quarters. The more I reflect about it this matter the more I think that having a more agile way of transportation could in the wrong hands, be more hazardous or harmful to the pedestrians surrounding the UCF campus. Comparable to the people on long boards, the people that I do see traveling around on campus wearing roller blades also seem to be for the most part inexperienced. Traveling at such a high rate of speed like they are; you would assume that the students using rollerblades would be more comfortable and cautious of knowing how to stop but that is not the case. According to what I’ve seen as a student at UCF, traveling along campus on something other than your feet is ludicrous. Putting the students at risk traveling through crowded walkways and sidewalks at a high rate speed is unnecessary assuming we are young healthy adults and capable of using our feet for transportation. Having seen some careless people around campus I would strongly suggest some regulations, as far as transportation is concerned. As an everyday spectator and student at UCF I’ve preached my opinion on the risks of how these modes of transportation could affect our peers, and that these students need to realize what issues they could face if anything were to happen. Not just pertaining to a self afflicted injury, but the possibility of anything from a lawsuit or death could occur. I strongly believe that as students, if we gave ourselves a little more time to get where we need to be, and proceed in an organized manner; then our campus at UCF can be and will be much safer as well as less congested.
Nicholas Byers
Tuesday, October 27, 2009
Monday, October 19, 2009
Commentary Assignment
Walking around campus, there is one thing in particular that frustrates as well as concern me. This frustration involves people using other things other than their feet to make their way through campus. Other then this being dangerous to themselves, it is dangerous to people around them. My first few weeks here it began to irritate me, but the longer I attend and the more incidents I have, the more it begins to frustrate me. From my perspective, we all need to go places, so why don’t we just be safe and use our feet in the way god attended us to use them. Unless we choose to do something about it, I believe that the situation is only going to get worse as well as the campus becoming more crowded. This trend not only puts innocent pedestrians at risk, but shows the evolving fast – paced lifestyles of the American culture.
The number one mode of transportation that frustrates me on campus is the bicycle. While the rest of us our walking casually at 5 to 6 miles per hour {around 10 if were late}, people riding bike can easily hit 20 miles per hour. Besides the fact that there whizzing by us at an alarming speed, they are also causing even more congestion then we already have on campus. Bicycles are a very enjoyable, healthy, fun – loving activity, but I don’t believe that there is much room for them on campus. Last week while walking to class along the breeze way, I was almost trampled by a two companion bicyclists speeding down the walkway. I was fortunate to being paying attention and quickly move out the way, but people are usually listening to their music which makes them more prone to not paying attention. It is still very dangerous and it is probably one of the most maneuverable modes of transportation there is.
Following the bike, in a very close second, has to be the skateboard / long boards. Even though they do not take up as much room as the bicycle they can hit very high speeds and can easily break an ankle. Without stereotyping, it seems that the “free spirits” with the care – free attitude are the ones riding these contraptions. With this attitude as well as blatant disrespect for their peers, there are numerous incidents just waiting to happen at an alarming rate. Unlike the Bicycle, which can easily be locked to a tree or bike rack; skateboards are forced to be carried around campus clogging the already congested classrooms and hallways. Another thing about the skateboard is the fact that most of the riders are inexperienced as well as just plain awful. Considering the danger of this transportation to a pedestrian around an experienced rider, the numbers must increase drastically around an inexperienced one. The campus is already extremely over crowded as it is, but with the skateboards and even longer, less maneuverable long boards, it is only increasing congestion and putting everyone else in danger. I don’t know if you have every walked in a 500 person class trying to climb over peoples laps with skate / long boards in front of them, but it is not easy, nor pleasant.
The last but probably most understandable and less dangerous mode of transportation is the rollerblades. Even though you can hit an extremely high rate of speed, they seem to be the most maneuverable even though I might be confused. Since my time at the University of Central Florida I have never really had any situations with them; so I might be bias. Looking at them from an outside perspective though I could see how they could also be dangerous. I have personally never ridden on rollerblades but they seem relatively maneuverable. Due to the fact that they could be a lot more of a burden to take off and on I can see why they are less likely to be used; which could be why I find them less of a burden. Nonetheless, it is still dangerous to travel by this transportation. A reason why it could be even more endangering to themselves and others is because of the freedom on might feel while on them. Instead of lugging around a 40 pound bicycle or a 20 pound skateboard; you are traveling using the relative same motion that you do while walking. People given this freedom might be more opportune to take more risks such as fly by people or head into close knit quarters. The more I think about it the more that I think that that having a more agile way of transportation could in the wrong hands, be more dangerous to the people surrounding them. Similar to the people on long boards, the people that I do see traveling around on campus wearing roller blades also seem to be for the most part inexperienced. Traveling at a high rate of speed like they are; you would assume that would be comfortable and know how to stop but that is not the case.
According to what I’ve seen walking around campus, traveling along campus on anything other than your feet is ridiculous. Putting the people around at risk traveling though a crowded campus at a rate of speed that is unjust is unnecessary. Having seen some irresponsible people around campus I would strongly suggest some regulations, as far as transportation is concerned. I’ve preached my opinion on the risks of how it could affect our peers, but they need to realize what issues they could face if anything were to happen. Not just pertaining to a self afflicted injury, but the possibility of anything from a lawsuit or death could occur. I honestly believe that if we just take a look in the mirror, give ourselves a little more time to get where we need to be, and proceed in an organized manner; then our campus can be a lot safer as well as less congested.
The number one mode of transportation that frustrates me on campus is the bicycle. While the rest of us our walking casually at 5 to 6 miles per hour {around 10 if were late}, people riding bike can easily hit 20 miles per hour. Besides the fact that there whizzing by us at an alarming speed, they are also causing even more congestion then we already have on campus. Bicycles are a very enjoyable, healthy, fun – loving activity, but I don’t believe that there is much room for them on campus. Last week while walking to class along the breeze way, I was almost trampled by a two companion bicyclists speeding down the walkway. I was fortunate to being paying attention and quickly move out the way, but people are usually listening to their music which makes them more prone to not paying attention. It is still very dangerous and it is probably one of the most maneuverable modes of transportation there is.
Following the bike, in a very close second, has to be the skateboard / long boards. Even though they do not take up as much room as the bicycle they can hit very high speeds and can easily break an ankle. Without stereotyping, it seems that the “free spirits” with the care – free attitude are the ones riding these contraptions. With this attitude as well as blatant disrespect for their peers, there are numerous incidents just waiting to happen at an alarming rate. Unlike the Bicycle, which can easily be locked to a tree or bike rack; skateboards are forced to be carried around campus clogging the already congested classrooms and hallways. Another thing about the skateboard is the fact that most of the riders are inexperienced as well as just plain awful. Considering the danger of this transportation to a pedestrian around an experienced rider, the numbers must increase drastically around an inexperienced one. The campus is already extremely over crowded as it is, but with the skateboards and even longer, less maneuverable long boards, it is only increasing congestion and putting everyone else in danger. I don’t know if you have every walked in a 500 person class trying to climb over peoples laps with skate / long boards in front of them, but it is not easy, nor pleasant.
The last but probably most understandable and less dangerous mode of transportation is the rollerblades. Even though you can hit an extremely high rate of speed, they seem to be the most maneuverable even though I might be confused. Since my time at the University of Central Florida I have never really had any situations with them; so I might be bias. Looking at them from an outside perspective though I could see how they could also be dangerous. I have personally never ridden on rollerblades but they seem relatively maneuverable. Due to the fact that they could be a lot more of a burden to take off and on I can see why they are less likely to be used; which could be why I find them less of a burden. Nonetheless, it is still dangerous to travel by this transportation. A reason why it could be even more endangering to themselves and others is because of the freedom on might feel while on them. Instead of lugging around a 40 pound bicycle or a 20 pound skateboard; you are traveling using the relative same motion that you do while walking. People given this freedom might be more opportune to take more risks such as fly by people or head into close knit quarters. The more I think about it the more that I think that that having a more agile way of transportation could in the wrong hands, be more dangerous to the people surrounding them. Similar to the people on long boards, the people that I do see traveling around on campus wearing roller blades also seem to be for the most part inexperienced. Traveling at a high rate of speed like they are; you would assume that would be comfortable and know how to stop but that is not the case.
According to what I’ve seen walking around campus, traveling along campus on anything other than your feet is ridiculous. Putting the people around at risk traveling though a crowded campus at a rate of speed that is unjust is unnecessary. Having seen some irresponsible people around campus I would strongly suggest some regulations, as far as transportation is concerned. I’ve preached my opinion on the risks of how it could affect our peers, but they need to realize what issues they could face if anything were to happen. Not just pertaining to a self afflicted injury, but the possibility of anything from a lawsuit or death could occur. I honestly believe that if we just take a look in the mirror, give ourselves a little more time to get where we need to be, and proceed in an organized manner; then our campus can be a lot safer as well as less congested.
Tuesday, October 13, 2009
about my thesis paragraph
In my thesis paragraph I'm going to include how people using other modes of transportation to get around campus frustrates me as well as puts others at risk
second paragraph - How bikes can hit the highest rate of speed and how they congest the campus
third paragraph - how skateboards and long boards effect the campus
fourth pararaph - how rollerblades are the least used but can also effect the weel being of the students on campus. escpecially if the rider is inexperienced.
second paragraph - How bikes can hit the highest rate of speed and how they congest the campus
third paragraph - how skateboards and long boards effect the campus
fourth pararaph - how rollerblades are the least used but can also effect the weel being of the students on campus. escpecially if the rider is inexperienced.
Thursday, October 8, 2009
Hypo Bowl
1.What is the trend or situation on which the commentary focuses?
The trend that sex sells, and that naive networks never follow through with there claims of changing. Also, that they will do anything to get viewers.2. Does the author give the reader an interesting introduction to the issue? Why or why not?
Yes, I thought that I could feel the passion that the reader.3. Does the author explain the context of the issue? How in-depth does he or she go? What do you think this signifies regarding the intended audience of the commentary?
Yes, I believe that in every incident they went into detail and focused on anyone who would listen.4. What are the possible causes of the trend or situation the author explores?
The trend is that sex sells, and that as time passes it becomes more acceptable.5. What examples or observations does the author give from his or her own life to back their belief that these are the possible causes?
I don’t believe that any examples came from their own life. I just believe that they were stating facts and backing them up with evidence.6. What is the author's stance on the topic?
From my perspective, I believe that the author is joking about the situation, and thinks that people are overreacting.7. What significance does the author see in this trend or situation?
I believe that the trend is that networks are going to do whatever it takes to get viewers and captivate there audience by any means necessary.
Nicholas Byers
The trend that sex sells, and that naive networks never follow through with there claims of changing. Also, that they will do anything to get viewers.2. Does the author give the reader an interesting introduction to the issue? Why or why not?
Yes, I thought that I could feel the passion that the reader.3. Does the author explain the context of the issue? How in-depth does he or she go? What do you think this signifies regarding the intended audience of the commentary?
Yes, I believe that in every incident they went into detail and focused on anyone who would listen.4. What are the possible causes of the trend or situation the author explores?
The trend is that sex sells, and that as time passes it becomes more acceptable.5. What examples or observations does the author give from his or her own life to back their belief that these are the possible causes?
I don’t believe that any examples came from their own life. I just believe that they were stating facts and backing them up with evidence.6. What is the author's stance on the topic?
From my perspective, I believe that the author is joking about the situation, and thinks that people are overreacting.7. What significance does the author see in this trend or situation?
I believe that the trend is that networks are going to do whatever it takes to get viewers and captivate there audience by any means necessary.
Nicholas Byers
Tuesday, October 6, 2009
letter to UCF
Dear UCF:
There is an epidemic, from my perspective, going on around campus. This is that students and faculty across campus are using other modes of transportation to get around campus while others, such as myself are walking. This frustrates me for a multiple of reasons. Number one is the fact that every day that I calmly make my way around campus I am being put at risk because of the fact that others are flying by me at an alarming rate. I understand that people may on occasion, be late for class which in turn will make them increase their rate of speed, but on bikes / roller blades / skateboards and long boards this is dangerous. From my point of view, I put others at risk when I’m sprinting trying to make class on time; and this is using my own feet. If you just sit and put yourself or one of your loved ones in this position then I believe that you will think hands down things need to be changed. Everyone, including teachers and staff are at risk and I believe under a certain amount of scrutiny, then we can make a change for the better. I have noticed also that some of the people using these modes of transportation are riding things twice the size of themselves. That can’t be safe. I literally saw a girl about five feet two inches tall riding a long board that was easier taller than she was and probably weighed just as much. There was no way that she could have controlled it in a crucial situation. I know that we can’t be bias and let some people using transportation and others not. So how could we make a drastic change for the better without drastically affecting the students? I figured that maybe there could be designated areas along the walkways around campus that could just be for bicycles / roller blades / skateboards etc. I believe that this could be an inexpensive way that could overall improve the well – being of the campus and its community. Not knowing the history of these incidents I can only go on what I see, and if there hasn’t been a lawsuit already then I’m sure it is only inevitable. I know multiple people {friends, family, etc.} that use different means of transportation to get around campus and I strongly urge them to reconsider and walk their lazy butts to class. I think that overall there needs to be some changes for the better around campus. Understandably I could see how at a smaller school this wouldn’t be such a problem, but the fact still remains that at one of the largest University’s in the country, we need to think outside the box and keep our students safety in mind. The majority of people do not like change, but when the overall well – being of the community is in question then without question, changes need to be made. Thank you very much for your time and I hope you take my words into consideration.
There is an epidemic, from my perspective, going on around campus. This is that students and faculty across campus are using other modes of transportation to get around campus while others, such as myself are walking. This frustrates me for a multiple of reasons. Number one is the fact that every day that I calmly make my way around campus I am being put at risk because of the fact that others are flying by me at an alarming rate. I understand that people may on occasion, be late for class which in turn will make them increase their rate of speed, but on bikes / roller blades / skateboards and long boards this is dangerous. From my point of view, I put others at risk when I’m sprinting trying to make class on time; and this is using my own feet. If you just sit and put yourself or one of your loved ones in this position then I believe that you will think hands down things need to be changed. Everyone, including teachers and staff are at risk and I believe under a certain amount of scrutiny, then we can make a change for the better. I have noticed also that some of the people using these modes of transportation are riding things twice the size of themselves. That can’t be safe. I literally saw a girl about five feet two inches tall riding a long board that was easier taller than she was and probably weighed just as much. There was no way that she could have controlled it in a crucial situation. I know that we can’t be bias and let some people using transportation and others not. So how could we make a drastic change for the better without drastically affecting the students? I figured that maybe there could be designated areas along the walkways around campus that could just be for bicycles / roller blades / skateboards etc. I believe that this could be an inexpensive way that could overall improve the well – being of the campus and its community. Not knowing the history of these incidents I can only go on what I see, and if there hasn’t been a lawsuit already then I’m sure it is only inevitable. I know multiple people {friends, family, etc.} that use different means of transportation to get around campus and I strongly urge them to reconsider and walk their lazy butts to class. I think that overall there needs to be some changes for the better around campus. Understandably I could see how at a smaller school this wouldn’t be such a problem, but the fact still remains that at one of the largest University’s in the country, we need to think outside the box and keep our students safety in mind. The majority of people do not like change, but when the overall well – being of the community is in question then without question, changes need to be made. Thank you very much for your time and I hope you take my words into consideration.
answer to my 10 questions
1. It could potentially put them in danger
2. they can get there own paths
3. makes me more worried about my surroundings
4. No i have never heardof any lawsuits
5. Yes, many of them
6. Observing my surroundings
7. A friend of the topic
8. It is connected to the overall well - being of the students on campus
9. Then it would be a lot more organized and safe around campus
10. For the safety of the community
2. they can get there own paths
3. makes me more worried about my surroundings
4. No i have never heardof any lawsuits
5. Yes, many of them
6. Observing my surroundings
7. A friend of the topic
8. It is connected to the overall well - being of the students on campus
9. Then it would be a lot more organized and safe around campus
10. For the safety of the community
Monday, October 5, 2009
commentary assignment
Walking around campus, there is one thing in particular that frustrates as well as concern me. This frustration involves people using other things other than their feet to make their way through campus. Other then this being dangerous to themselves, it is dangerous to people around them. My first few weeks here it began to irritate me, but the longer I attend and the more incidents I have, the more it begins to frustrate me. From my perspective, we all need to go places, so why don’t we just be safe and use our feet in the way god attended us to use them. Unless we choose to do something about it, I believe that the situation is only going to get worse as well as the campus becoming more crowded.
The number one mode of transportation that frustrates me on campus is the bicycle. While the rest of us our walking casually at 5 to 6 miles per hour {around 10 if were late}, people riding bike can easily hit 20 miles per hour. Besides the fact that there whizzing by us at an alarming speed, they are also causing even more congestion then we already have on campus. Bicycles are a very enjoyable, healthy, fun – loving activity, but I don’t believe that there is much room for them on campus. Last week while walking to class along the breeze way, I was almost trampled by a two companion bicyclists speeding down the walkway. I was fortunate to being paying attention and quickly move out the way, but people are usually listening to their music which makes them more prone to not paying attention. It is still very dangerous and it is probably one of the most maneuverable modes of transportation there is.
Following the bike, in a very close second, has to be the skateboard / long boards. Even though they do not take up as much room as the bicycle they can hit very high speeds and can easily break an ankle. Without stereotyping, it seems that the “free spirits” with the care – free attitude are the ones riding these contraptions. With this attitude as well as blatant disrespect for their peers, there are numerous incidents just waiting to happen at an alarming rate. Unlike the Bicycle, which can easily be locked to a tree or bike rack; skateboards are forced to be carried around campus clogging the already congested classrooms and hallways. Another thing about the skateboard is the fact that most of the riders are inexperienced as well as just plain awful. Considering the danger of this transportation to a pedestrian around an experienced rider, the numbers must increase drastically around an inexperienced one. The campus is already extremely over crowded as it is, but with the skateboards and even longer, less maneuverable long boards, it is only increasing congestion and putting everyone else in danger. I don’t know if you have every walked in a 500 person class trying to climb over peoples laps with skate / long boards in front of them, but it is not easy, nor pleasant.
The last but probably most understandable and less dangerous mode of transportation is the rollerblades. Even though you can hit an extremely high rate of speed, they seem to be the most maneuverable even though I might be confused. Since my time at the University of Central Florida I have never really had any situations with them; so I might be bias. Looking at them from an outside perspective though I could see how they could also be dangerous. I have personally never ridden on rollerblades but they seem relatively maneuverable. Due to the fact that they could be a lot more of a burden to take off and on I can see why they are less likely to be used; which could be why I find them less of a burden. Nonetheless, it is still dangerous to travel by this transportation. A reason why it could be even more endangering to themselves and others is because of the freedom on might feel while on them. Instead of lugging around a 40 pound bicycle or a 20 pound skateboard; you are traveling using the relative same motion that you do while walking. People given this freedom might be more opportune to take more risks such as fly by people or head into close knit quarters. The more I think about it the more that I think that that having a more agile way of transportation could in the wrong hands, be more dangerous to the people surrounding them. Similar to the people on long boards, the people that I do see traveling around on campus wearing roller blades also seem to be for the most part inexperienced. Traveling at a high rate of speed like they are; you would assume that would be comfortable and know how to stop but that is not the case.
According to what I’ve seen walking around campus, traveling along campus on anything other than your feet is ridiculous. Putting the people around at risk traveling though a crowded campus at a rate of speed that is unjust is unnecessary. Having seen some irresponsible people around campus I would strongly suggest some regulations, as far as transportation is concerned. I’ve preached my opinion on the risks of how it could affect our peers, but they need to realize what issues they could face if anything were to happen. Not just pertaining to a self afflicted injury, but the possibility of anything from a lawsuit or death could occur. I honestly believe that if we just take a look in the mirror, give ourselves a little more time to get where we need to be, and proceed in an organized manner; then our campus can be a lot safer as well as less congested.
The number one mode of transportation that frustrates me on campus is the bicycle. While the rest of us our walking casually at 5 to 6 miles per hour {around 10 if were late}, people riding bike can easily hit 20 miles per hour. Besides the fact that there whizzing by us at an alarming speed, they are also causing even more congestion then we already have on campus. Bicycles are a very enjoyable, healthy, fun – loving activity, but I don’t believe that there is much room for them on campus. Last week while walking to class along the breeze way, I was almost trampled by a two companion bicyclists speeding down the walkway. I was fortunate to being paying attention and quickly move out the way, but people are usually listening to their music which makes them more prone to not paying attention. It is still very dangerous and it is probably one of the most maneuverable modes of transportation there is.
Following the bike, in a very close second, has to be the skateboard / long boards. Even though they do not take up as much room as the bicycle they can hit very high speeds and can easily break an ankle. Without stereotyping, it seems that the “free spirits” with the care – free attitude are the ones riding these contraptions. With this attitude as well as blatant disrespect for their peers, there are numerous incidents just waiting to happen at an alarming rate. Unlike the Bicycle, which can easily be locked to a tree or bike rack; skateboards are forced to be carried around campus clogging the already congested classrooms and hallways. Another thing about the skateboard is the fact that most of the riders are inexperienced as well as just plain awful. Considering the danger of this transportation to a pedestrian around an experienced rider, the numbers must increase drastically around an inexperienced one. The campus is already extremely over crowded as it is, but with the skateboards and even longer, less maneuverable long boards, it is only increasing congestion and putting everyone else in danger. I don’t know if you have every walked in a 500 person class trying to climb over peoples laps with skate / long boards in front of them, but it is not easy, nor pleasant.
The last but probably most understandable and less dangerous mode of transportation is the rollerblades. Even though you can hit an extremely high rate of speed, they seem to be the most maneuverable even though I might be confused. Since my time at the University of Central Florida I have never really had any situations with them; so I might be bias. Looking at them from an outside perspective though I could see how they could also be dangerous. I have personally never ridden on rollerblades but they seem relatively maneuverable. Due to the fact that they could be a lot more of a burden to take off and on I can see why they are less likely to be used; which could be why I find them less of a burden. Nonetheless, it is still dangerous to travel by this transportation. A reason why it could be even more endangering to themselves and others is because of the freedom on might feel while on them. Instead of lugging around a 40 pound bicycle or a 20 pound skateboard; you are traveling using the relative same motion that you do while walking. People given this freedom might be more opportune to take more risks such as fly by people or head into close knit quarters. The more I think about it the more that I think that that having a more agile way of transportation could in the wrong hands, be more dangerous to the people surrounding them. Similar to the people on long boards, the people that I do see traveling around on campus wearing roller blades also seem to be for the most part inexperienced. Traveling at a high rate of speed like they are; you would assume that would be comfortable and know how to stop but that is not the case.
According to what I’ve seen walking around campus, traveling along campus on anything other than your feet is ridiculous. Putting the people around at risk traveling though a crowded campus at a rate of speed that is unjust is unnecessary. Having seen some irresponsible people around campus I would strongly suggest some regulations, as far as transportation is concerned. I’ve preached my opinion on the risks of how it could affect our peers, but they need to realize what issues they could face if anything were to happen. Not just pertaining to a self afflicted injury, but the possibility of anything from a lawsuit or death could occur. I honestly believe that if we just take a look in the mirror, give ourselves a little more time to get where we need to be, and proceed in an organized manner; then our campus can be a lot safer as well as less congested.
Tuesday, September 29, 2009
start of commentary assignment
Walking around campus, there is one thing in particular that frustrates as well as concern me. This frustration involves people using other things other than their feet to make their way through campus. Other then this being dangerous to themselves, it is dangerous to people around them. My first few weeks here it began to irritate me, but the longer I attend and the more incidents I have, the more it begins to frustrate me. From my perspective, we all need to go places, so why don’t we just be safe and use our feet in the way god attended us to use them.
The number one mode of transportation that frustrates me on campus is the bicycle. While the rest of us our walking casually at 5 to 6 miles per hour {around 10 if were late}, people riding bike can easily hit 20 miles per hour. Besides the fact that there whizzing by us at an alarming speed, they are also causing even more congestion then we already have on campus. Bicycles are a very enjoyable, healthy, fun – loving activity, but I don’t believe that there is much room for them on campus. Last week while walking to class along the breeze way, I was almost trampled by a two companion bicyclists speeding down the walkway. I was fortunate to being paying attention and quickly move out the way, but people are usually listening to their music which makes them more prone to not paying attention. It is still very dangerous and it is probably one of the most maneuverable modes of transportation there is.
The number one mode of transportation that frustrates me on campus is the bicycle. While the rest of us our walking casually at 5 to 6 miles per hour {around 10 if were late}, people riding bike can easily hit 20 miles per hour. Besides the fact that there whizzing by us at an alarming speed, they are also causing even more congestion then we already have on campus. Bicycles are a very enjoyable, healthy, fun – loving activity, but I don’t believe that there is much room for them on campus. Last week while walking to class along the breeze way, I was almost trampled by a two companion bicyclists speeding down the walkway. I was fortunate to being paying attention and quickly move out the way, but people are usually listening to their music which makes them more prone to not paying attention. It is still very dangerous and it is probably one of the most maneuverable modes of transportation there is.
Thursday, September 24, 2009
3 brainstorming ideas
1. People wearing other college shirts walking around the UCF campus. Then why did they come to UCF?
2. A lot of girls wear skimpy clothing. Are the trying to show off? Is it just the heat?
3. The over population of ths school. Effects classrooms, parking, learning ability, etc.
2. A lot of girls wear skimpy clothing. Are the trying to show off? Is it just the heat?
3. The over population of ths school. Effects classrooms, parking, learning ability, etc.
Wednesday, September 23, 2009
FINAL DRAFT
One of my fondest memories had to be the first playoff football game I have ever been to. It was December 2007; the New England Patriots were playing the Jacksonville Jaguars. At around 11:00am my best friend Anthony and I arrived at Gillette stadium. The weather couldn’t have been more than a crisp 20 degrees Fahrenheit. Anthony surprised me with the tickets not letting me know where we were going to be sitting and observing the game; he said, “You will see for yourself, it’s a surprise”. A snarl from me soon followed, but I just wanted to get the day started so I let him have the satisfaction of surprising me.
As we pulled up, I noticed that we were pulling into the box seat parking lot; my smile couldn’t get any bigger. I was as happy as a 5 year old child opening up his presents on Christmas morning. Every parking lot was as full as it could be with at least a fifteen minute waiting period. We passed the gate and entered a practically empty parking lot. Before Anthony could put the car in park I opened my door and jumped out with anticipation. As soon as we became situated, we began to light a fire in the fire pit we brought to keep warm. Even though the weather was freezing, we began to set up around our car for tailgating. We ecstatically started to play beer pong in our snow gloves, Patriots sweatshirts and jackets. What first was an adrenaline rush soon became early stages of hypothermia; needless to say the first few beers took care of that. After starting the grill and polishing off a few hamburgers and hot dogs the game was just around the corner. We made our way up the packed escalator which seemed to be the stairway to heaven. As I walked by the concession stands into a crowd of 70,000 screaming fans, I knew I was in for the time of my life. As Anthony and I got to our seats all we saw was a sea of blue, silver, and red and white fans cheering for the game to start. As I sipped on my beer waiting for the horn to blow and the game to start, the Patriots marched onto the field with perfection and integrity. Everyone and I started shouting and chanting “P – A – T – S PATS! PATS! PATS!” as the Jacksonville Jaguars won the toss and elected to receive as the Patriots defended the North goal.
With the first quarter almost over and my heart beating like a lab rat, the Patriots could not be in control of the Jaguars, struggling to contain a surprise passing attack. The grip of my beer became more firm as the Jaguars shocked both the spectators and the Patriots with an 80-yard opening touchdown drive that were remarkable for the fact that the Jaguars took to the air. The Jaguars completed a 34-yard completion to Marcedes Lewis which was followed by an 8-yard touchdown pass that went to Matt Jones. It was the first time since Bill Belichick became the coach, that the Patriots have given up points on an opening drive in a playoff game. Now, it is finally time for the unstoppable Patriots to show what their unbelievable, record – setting offense was made of. The fans didn’t even seem fazed by Jacksonville’s score; confident that the Patriots couldn’t be subdued. The Patriots received the kickoff as the whole stadium erupts in udder chaos. Chad Jackson brings it out of the end zone like so many times before with intentions to run it back, but only made it to the 19 yard line. Finally, the anticipation was over, Brady and the phenomenal Patriots offense took the field like so many times before. Tom “terrific” walks up to the line for his first play with the sheer presence of greatness.”Blue forty two, blue forty two, set hut, hut, and the ball was snapped. Brady dropped back as Moss sprinted his way down the sideline, right before the ball left Brady’s hand, he was sacked. The fans were disappointed, but didn’t lose hope. They marched down the field and finished the drive with a touchdown pass to Ben Watson. At the end of the 1st quarter the score was 7 – 7 with the game tied.
Although we were feeling apprehensive about the second quarter Anthony and I knew the Patriots would come back with a bang. While the clumsy heavy set man next to us barely knew his name from being too intoxicated, the second quarter had begun. Just as we assumed the New England Patriots’ Maroney gets the ball back; with the crowd cheering as each of Maroney’s long strides came closer to a touchdown. As the spectators and I were all standing and shouting over joyful with the Patriots breaking the tie, the clumsy heavy set man next to me dropped his steaming hot nachos with cheese all over my brand new jersey. Holding my right hand in a fist ready to aim at his face, I tried not to lose my composure, cleaned up the mess and ignored the fact that I was sitting next to an ignoramus. Getting back in game mode everyone goes crazy as the Jacksonville Jaguars quarterback Garrard passes to Wilford scoring a touchdown. “BOO-BOO-BOO” everyone one is roaring. Toward the end of the 2nd quarter New England Patriots get the ball back but miss the field goal.
At the beginning of halftime, my right hand is numb from the bitter cold weather yet still clenched in a fist from wanting to punch ignoramus in the face. During halftime Anthony and I discussed the game over a cup of hot coffee roaming the concessions barely able to move with all the fans crowding around like a herd of cattle. Even though my jersey was ruined and I had almost got into a fight with the clumsy intoxicated man, I still was having the time of my life. I was at a New England Patriots game in box seats and couldn’t be happier. To spread my joy I decided to buy my two older brothers and I Tom Brady jerseys.
Starting the third quarter, I called my brothers and told them what a phenomenal time I was having and that I had some gifts for them when I got home. As the Patriots team of red, white, silver and nautical blue came trotting out from the locker rooms I knew they were ready to win it BIG. When your team is that good, you always have faith that the New England Patriots would come back strong and the second half. With the Patriots having the ball, wide receiver Wes Welker caught a pass scoring another TOUCHDOWN. My adrenaline was pumping as the Jaguars got the ball back and scored a field goal. Not to worry though, the New England Patriots came back with redemption, scoring a touchdown pass to Tight End Ben Watson ending the 3rd quarter.
The final quarter begins with the crowd chanting “P-A-T-S PATS! PATS! PATS! GO PATS”. The Jaguars start off the quarter driving the ball down the field and getting a field goal, leaving the Patriots no other option but to answer right back by getting a field goal for themselves. The crowd is so loud you can hardly hear the sports announcers. The Jacksonville Jaguars get the ball back with the clock ticking away. Rodney Harrison like the superstar that he is, comes out of nowhere intercepting the ball from the Jags and seals the deal. The volume of the spectators, cheerleaders, little children and the Patriots players had sprung to a deafening tone. Women and men hugging and kissing even pushing and shoving with gratification of the marvelous win by the New England Patriots.
As the chanting slowly came to a mumble, we reluctantly began to make our way to the parking lot. People were passing by still chanting for the Patriots as if they were still playing. As we made our way to the escalator I began to notice the effect the long day had on the fans. As I scanned the parking lot, I noticed people doing everything from sleeping to getting rowdy and “still” tailgating. My Friends and I made our way to the car arguing about who was the most sober to drive. As I look at Alex, I assertively announce to him that he is driving. As a few seconds passed I heard him mumble something about a play that he believed to still be going, immediately followed by a burp. As I turned to ask Greg, I noticed he was more focused on trying to walk, nonetheless drive. As Anthony and I started laughing we noticed that we were the only ones still consciously standing. I was reluctant to drive so I slide the keys over the hood to Anthony who began teasing me, announcing that he was the “Last man standing”. We both started laughing then proceeded to put our seatbelts on. As the car hit the highway and homebound we were, I began to reflect on the time that just passed. I took a look around at the noisy sleepers in the back and Anthony driving ever so intently. A smile boarded my face, as I knew that I had just experience one of the best times in my life.
As we pulled up, I noticed that we were pulling into the box seat parking lot; my smile couldn’t get any bigger. I was as happy as a 5 year old child opening up his presents on Christmas morning. Every parking lot was as full as it could be with at least a fifteen minute waiting period. We passed the gate and entered a practically empty parking lot. Before Anthony could put the car in park I opened my door and jumped out with anticipation. As soon as we became situated, we began to light a fire in the fire pit we brought to keep warm. Even though the weather was freezing, we began to set up around our car for tailgating. We ecstatically started to play beer pong in our snow gloves, Patriots sweatshirts and jackets. What first was an adrenaline rush soon became early stages of hypothermia; needless to say the first few beers took care of that. After starting the grill and polishing off a few hamburgers and hot dogs the game was just around the corner. We made our way up the packed escalator which seemed to be the stairway to heaven. As I walked by the concession stands into a crowd of 70,000 screaming fans, I knew I was in for the time of my life. As Anthony and I got to our seats all we saw was a sea of blue, silver, and red and white fans cheering for the game to start. As I sipped on my beer waiting for the horn to blow and the game to start, the Patriots marched onto the field with perfection and integrity. Everyone and I started shouting and chanting “P – A – T – S PATS! PATS! PATS!” as the Jacksonville Jaguars won the toss and elected to receive as the Patriots defended the North goal.
With the first quarter almost over and my heart beating like a lab rat, the Patriots could not be in control of the Jaguars, struggling to contain a surprise passing attack. The grip of my beer became more firm as the Jaguars shocked both the spectators and the Patriots with an 80-yard opening touchdown drive that were remarkable for the fact that the Jaguars took to the air. The Jaguars completed a 34-yard completion to Marcedes Lewis which was followed by an 8-yard touchdown pass that went to Matt Jones. It was the first time since Bill Belichick became the coach, that the Patriots have given up points on an opening drive in a playoff game. Now, it is finally time for the unstoppable Patriots to show what their unbelievable, record – setting offense was made of. The fans didn’t even seem fazed by Jacksonville’s score; confident that the Patriots couldn’t be subdued. The Patriots received the kickoff as the whole stadium erupts in udder chaos. Chad Jackson brings it out of the end zone like so many times before with intentions to run it back, but only made it to the 19 yard line. Finally, the anticipation was over, Brady and the phenomenal Patriots offense took the field like so many times before. Tom “terrific” walks up to the line for his first play with the sheer presence of greatness.”Blue forty two, blue forty two, set hut, hut, and the ball was snapped. Brady dropped back as Moss sprinted his way down the sideline, right before the ball left Brady’s hand, he was sacked. The fans were disappointed, but didn’t lose hope. They marched down the field and finished the drive with a touchdown pass to Ben Watson. At the end of the 1st quarter the score was 7 – 7 with the game tied.
Although we were feeling apprehensive about the second quarter Anthony and I knew the Patriots would come back with a bang. While the clumsy heavy set man next to us barely knew his name from being too intoxicated, the second quarter had begun. Just as we assumed the New England Patriots’ Maroney gets the ball back; with the crowd cheering as each of Maroney’s long strides came closer to a touchdown. As the spectators and I were all standing and shouting over joyful with the Patriots breaking the tie, the clumsy heavy set man next to me dropped his steaming hot nachos with cheese all over my brand new jersey. Holding my right hand in a fist ready to aim at his face, I tried not to lose my composure, cleaned up the mess and ignored the fact that I was sitting next to an ignoramus. Getting back in game mode everyone goes crazy as the Jacksonville Jaguars quarterback Garrard passes to Wilford scoring a touchdown. “BOO-BOO-BOO” everyone one is roaring. Toward the end of the 2nd quarter New England Patriots get the ball back but miss the field goal.
At the beginning of halftime, my right hand is numb from the bitter cold weather yet still clenched in a fist from wanting to punch ignoramus in the face. During halftime Anthony and I discussed the game over a cup of hot coffee roaming the concessions barely able to move with all the fans crowding around like a herd of cattle. Even though my jersey was ruined and I had almost got into a fight with the clumsy intoxicated man, I still was having the time of my life. I was at a New England Patriots game in box seats and couldn’t be happier. To spread my joy I decided to buy my two older brothers and I Tom Brady jerseys.
Starting the third quarter, I called my brothers and told them what a phenomenal time I was having and that I had some gifts for them when I got home. As the Patriots team of red, white, silver and nautical blue came trotting out from the locker rooms I knew they were ready to win it BIG. When your team is that good, you always have faith that the New England Patriots would come back strong and the second half. With the Patriots having the ball, wide receiver Wes Welker caught a pass scoring another TOUCHDOWN. My adrenaline was pumping as the Jaguars got the ball back and scored a field goal. Not to worry though, the New England Patriots came back with redemption, scoring a touchdown pass to Tight End Ben Watson ending the 3rd quarter.
The final quarter begins with the crowd chanting “P-A-T-S PATS! PATS! PATS! GO PATS”. The Jaguars start off the quarter driving the ball down the field and getting a field goal, leaving the Patriots no other option but to answer right back by getting a field goal for themselves. The crowd is so loud you can hardly hear the sports announcers. The Jacksonville Jaguars get the ball back with the clock ticking away. Rodney Harrison like the superstar that he is, comes out of nowhere intercepting the ball from the Jags and seals the deal. The volume of the spectators, cheerleaders, little children and the Patriots players had sprung to a deafening tone. Women and men hugging and kissing even pushing and shoving with gratification of the marvelous win by the New England Patriots.
As the chanting slowly came to a mumble, we reluctantly began to make our way to the parking lot. People were passing by still chanting for the Patriots as if they were still playing. As we made our way to the escalator I began to notice the effect the long day had on the fans. As I scanned the parking lot, I noticed people doing everything from sleeping to getting rowdy and “still” tailgating. My Friends and I made our way to the car arguing about who was the most sober to drive. As I look at Alex, I assertively announce to him that he is driving. As a few seconds passed I heard him mumble something about a play that he believed to still be going, immediately followed by a burp. As I turned to ask Greg, I noticed he was more focused on trying to walk, nonetheless drive. As Anthony and I started laughing we noticed that we were the only ones still consciously standing. I was reluctant to drive so I slide the keys over the hood to Anthony who began teasing me, announcing that he was the “Last man standing”. We both started laughing then proceeded to put our seatbelts on. As the car hit the highway and homebound we were, I began to reflect on the time that just passed. I took a look around at the noisy sleepers in the back and Anthony driving ever so intently. A smile boarded my face, as I knew that I had just experience one of the best times in my life.
Wednesday, September 16, 2009
One of my fondest memories had to be the first playoff football game I have ever been to. It was December 2007; the New England Patriots were playing the Jacksonville Jaguars. At around 11:00am my best friend Anthony and I arrived at Gillette stadium. The weather couldn’t have been more than a crisp 20 degrees Fahrenheit. Anthony surprised me with the tickets not letting me know where we were going to be sitting and observing the game he said, “You will see for yourself, it’s a surprise”. Just wound up to get this day started and get to the game I let him have the satisfaction of surprising me.
As we pulled up, I noticed that we were pulling into the box seat parking lot; my smile couldn’t get any bigger. I was as happy as a 5 year old child opening up his presents on Christmas morning. Every parking lot was as full as it could be with at least a fifteen minute waiting period. We passed the gate and entered a practically empty parking lot. Before Anthony could put the car in park I opened my door and jumped out with anticipation. As soon as we became situated, we began to light a fire in the fire pit we brought to keep warm. Even though the weather was freezing, we began to set up around our car for tailgating. We ecstatically started to play beer pong in our snow gloves, Patriots sweatshirts and jackets. What first was an adrenaline rush soon became early stages of hypothermia; needless to say the first few beers took care of that. After starting the grill and polishing off a few hamburgers and hot dogs the game was just around the corner. We made our way up the packed escalator which seemed to be the stairway to heaven. As I walked by the concession stands into a crowd of 70,000 screaming fans, I knew I was in for the time of my life. As Anthony and I got to our seats all we saw was a sea of blue, silver, and red and white fans cheering for the game to start. As I sipped on my beer waiting for the horn to blow and the game to start, the Patriots marched onto the field with perfection and integrity. Everyone and I started shouting and chanting “P – A – T – S PATS! PATS! PATS!” as the Jacksonville Jaguars won the toss and elected to receive as the Patriots defended the North goal.
With the first quarter almost over and my heart beating like a lab rat, the Patriots could not be in control of the Jaguars, struggling to contain a surprise passing attack. The grip of my beer became more firm as the Jaguars shocked both the spectators and the Patriots with an 80-yard opening touchdown drive that were remarkable for the fact that the Jaguars took to the air. The Jaguars completed a 34-yard completion to Marcedes Lewis with an 8-yard touchdown pass that went to Matt Jones. It was the first time since Bill Belichick became the coach that the Patriots have given up points on an opening drive in a playoff game. Now it is finally time for the unstoppable Patriots to show what their unbelievable, record – setting offense was made of. The fans didn’t even seem fazed by Jacksonville’s score, confident that the Patriots couldn’t be subdued. The Patriots receive the kickoff as the whole stadium erupts in udder chaos. Chad Jackson brings it out of the end zone like so many times before with intentions to run it back, but only made it to the 19 yard line. Finally, the anticipation was over, Brady and the phenomenal Patriots offense took the field like so many times before. Tom terrific walks up to the line for his first play with the sheer presence of greatness.”Blue forty two, blue forty two, set hut, hut, and the ball snapped. Brady dropped back as Moss sprinted his way down the sideline, right before the ball left Brady’s hand, he was sacked. The fans were disappointed but didn’t lose hope. They marched down the field and finished the drive with a touchdown pass to Ben Watson . At the end of the 1st quarter the score was 7 – 7 with the game tied.
Although we were feeling apprehensive about the second quarter Anthony and I knew the Patriots would come back with a bang. While the clumsy heavy set man next to us barely knew his name from being too intoxicated the second quarter had begun. Just as we assumed the New England Patriots Maroney gets the ball back; with the crowd cheering as each of Maroney’s long strides came closer to a touchdown. As the spectators and I were all standing and shouting over joyful with the Patriots breaking the tie, the clumsy heavy set man next to me dropped his steaming hot nachos with cheese all over my brand new jersey. Holding my right hand in a fist ready to aim at his face I tried not to lose my composure, cleaned up the mess and ignored the fact that I was sitting next to an ignoramus. Getting back in game mode everyone goes crazy as the Jacksonville Jaguars player Garrad passes to Wilford scoring a touchdown. “BOO-BOO-BOO” everyone one is roaring. To end the 2nd quarter New England Patriots get the ball back but miss the field goal.
At the beginning of halftime my right hand is numb from the bitter cold weather yet still clenched in a fist from wanting to punch ignoramus in the face. During halftime Anthony and I discussed the game over a cup of hot coffee roaming the concessions barely able to move with all the fans crowding around like a herd of cattle. Even though my jersey was ruined and I had almost got in a fight the clumsy intoxicated man, I still was having the time of my life. I was at a New England Patriots game in box seats and couldn’t be happier. To spread my joy I decided to buy my two older brothers and I Tom Brady jerseys.
Starting the third quarter I called my brothers and told them what a phenomenal time I was having and that I had some gifts for them when I got home. As the Patriots team of red, white, silver and nautical blue came trotting out from the locker rooms I knew they were ready to win it BIG and had faith our New England team would come back strong and this second half. With the Patriots having the ball, player Welker caught a pass scoring another TOUCHDOWN. My adrenaline was pumping as the Jaguars get the ball back and scoring a field goal but not to worry New England Patriots come back for redemption scoring a touchdown pass to player Ben Watson ending the 3rd quarter.
The final quarter begins with the crowd chanting “P-A-T-S PATS! PATS! PATS! GO PATS”. The Jaguars start off the quarter driving the ball down the field and getting a field goal, leaving the Patriots no other option but to answer right back by getting a field goal for themselves. The crowd is so loud you can hardly hear the sports announcer, Jacksonville gets the ball back with the clock ticking away. Rodney Harrison like the superstar that he is comes out of nowhere intercepting the ball from the Jags and seals the deal. The volume of the spectators, cheerleaders, little children and the Patriots players had sprung to a deafening tone. Women and men hugging and kissing even pushing and shoving with gratification of the marvelous win by the New England Patriots.
As the chanting slowly came to a mumble, we reluctantly began to make our way to the parking lot. People were passing by still chanting for the Patriots as if they were still playing. As we made our way to the escalator I began to notice the effect the long day had on the fans. As I scanned the parking lot, I noticed people doing everything from sleeping to getting rowdy and still tailgating. My Friends and I made our way to the car arguing about who was the most sober to drive. That argument quickly came to a halt as Anthony and myself were the only ones still standing. I was reluctant to drive so I gave the keys to Anthony. As the car hit the highway and homebound we were, I began to reflect on the time that just passed. I took a look around the car at the noisy sleepers in the back and Anthony driving ever so intently, I knew that I had just experience one of the best times in my life.
As we pulled up, I noticed that we were pulling into the box seat parking lot; my smile couldn’t get any bigger. I was as happy as a 5 year old child opening up his presents on Christmas morning. Every parking lot was as full as it could be with at least a fifteen minute waiting period. We passed the gate and entered a practically empty parking lot. Before Anthony could put the car in park I opened my door and jumped out with anticipation. As soon as we became situated, we began to light a fire in the fire pit we brought to keep warm. Even though the weather was freezing, we began to set up around our car for tailgating. We ecstatically started to play beer pong in our snow gloves, Patriots sweatshirts and jackets. What first was an adrenaline rush soon became early stages of hypothermia; needless to say the first few beers took care of that. After starting the grill and polishing off a few hamburgers and hot dogs the game was just around the corner. We made our way up the packed escalator which seemed to be the stairway to heaven. As I walked by the concession stands into a crowd of 70,000 screaming fans, I knew I was in for the time of my life. As Anthony and I got to our seats all we saw was a sea of blue, silver, and red and white fans cheering for the game to start. As I sipped on my beer waiting for the horn to blow and the game to start, the Patriots marched onto the field with perfection and integrity. Everyone and I started shouting and chanting “P – A – T – S PATS! PATS! PATS!” as the Jacksonville Jaguars won the toss and elected to receive as the Patriots defended the North goal.
With the first quarter almost over and my heart beating like a lab rat, the Patriots could not be in control of the Jaguars, struggling to contain a surprise passing attack. The grip of my beer became more firm as the Jaguars shocked both the spectators and the Patriots with an 80-yard opening touchdown drive that were remarkable for the fact that the Jaguars took to the air. The Jaguars completed a 34-yard completion to Marcedes Lewis with an 8-yard touchdown pass that went to Matt Jones. It was the first time since Bill Belichick became the coach that the Patriots have given up points on an opening drive in a playoff game. Now it is finally time for the unstoppable Patriots to show what their unbelievable, record – setting offense was made of. The fans didn’t even seem fazed by Jacksonville’s score, confident that the Patriots couldn’t be subdued. The Patriots receive the kickoff as the whole stadium erupts in udder chaos. Chad Jackson brings it out of the end zone like so many times before with intentions to run it back, but only made it to the 19 yard line. Finally, the anticipation was over, Brady and the phenomenal Patriots offense took the field like so many times before. Tom terrific walks up to the line for his first play with the sheer presence of greatness.”Blue forty two, blue forty two, set hut, hut, and the ball snapped. Brady dropped back as Moss sprinted his way down the sideline, right before the ball left Brady’s hand, he was sacked. The fans were disappointed but didn’t lose hope. They marched down the field and finished the drive with a touchdown pass to Ben Watson . At the end of the 1st quarter the score was 7 – 7 with the game tied.
Although we were feeling apprehensive about the second quarter Anthony and I knew the Patriots would come back with a bang. While the clumsy heavy set man next to us barely knew his name from being too intoxicated the second quarter had begun. Just as we assumed the New England Patriots Maroney gets the ball back; with the crowd cheering as each of Maroney’s long strides came closer to a touchdown. As the spectators and I were all standing and shouting over joyful with the Patriots breaking the tie, the clumsy heavy set man next to me dropped his steaming hot nachos with cheese all over my brand new jersey. Holding my right hand in a fist ready to aim at his face I tried not to lose my composure, cleaned up the mess and ignored the fact that I was sitting next to an ignoramus. Getting back in game mode everyone goes crazy as the Jacksonville Jaguars player Garrad passes to Wilford scoring a touchdown. “BOO-BOO-BOO” everyone one is roaring. To end the 2nd quarter New England Patriots get the ball back but miss the field goal.
At the beginning of halftime my right hand is numb from the bitter cold weather yet still clenched in a fist from wanting to punch ignoramus in the face. During halftime Anthony and I discussed the game over a cup of hot coffee roaming the concessions barely able to move with all the fans crowding around like a herd of cattle. Even though my jersey was ruined and I had almost got in a fight the clumsy intoxicated man, I still was having the time of my life. I was at a New England Patriots game in box seats and couldn’t be happier. To spread my joy I decided to buy my two older brothers and I Tom Brady jerseys.
Starting the third quarter I called my brothers and told them what a phenomenal time I was having and that I had some gifts for them when I got home. As the Patriots team of red, white, silver and nautical blue came trotting out from the locker rooms I knew they were ready to win it BIG and had faith our New England team would come back strong and this second half. With the Patriots having the ball, player Welker caught a pass scoring another TOUCHDOWN. My adrenaline was pumping as the Jaguars get the ball back and scoring a field goal but not to worry New England Patriots come back for redemption scoring a touchdown pass to player Ben Watson ending the 3rd quarter.
The final quarter begins with the crowd chanting “P-A-T-S PATS! PATS! PATS! GO PATS”. The Jaguars start off the quarter driving the ball down the field and getting a field goal, leaving the Patriots no other option but to answer right back by getting a field goal for themselves. The crowd is so loud you can hardly hear the sports announcer, Jacksonville gets the ball back with the clock ticking away. Rodney Harrison like the superstar that he is comes out of nowhere intercepting the ball from the Jags and seals the deal. The volume of the spectators, cheerleaders, little children and the Patriots players had sprung to a deafening tone. Women and men hugging and kissing even pushing and shoving with gratification of the marvelous win by the New England Patriots.
As the chanting slowly came to a mumble, we reluctantly began to make our way to the parking lot. People were passing by still chanting for the Patriots as if they were still playing. As we made our way to the escalator I began to notice the effect the long day had on the fans. As I scanned the parking lot, I noticed people doing everything from sleeping to getting rowdy and still tailgating. My Friends and I made our way to the car arguing about who was the most sober to drive. That argument quickly came to a halt as Anthony and myself were the only ones still standing. I was reluctant to drive so I gave the keys to Anthony. As the car hit the highway and homebound we were, I began to reflect on the time that just passed. I took a look around the car at the noisy sleepers in the back and Anthony driving ever so intently, I knew that I had just experience one of the best times in my life.
Tuesday, September 15, 2009
Ms. Moody
Nicholas Byers
September 15, 2009
I believe that the review process that we did in class was extremely helpful. The proof reading of my draft was very particular in what I should improve and be more insightful about. I do not know if it was just the person’s personal opinion, but nonetheless, it was very helpful.
The most important information I got from my proof reader was to show more emotion. I am very passionate about the game and what I wrote about, but I think sometimes I fail to show my intensity. This occasion in my life has impacted me greatly and I believe that sometimes it is hard to write about and express all the emotions that I felt on that particular day. One important method that the proof reader gave me, which I’m extremely grateful for, is to sit down for a day and try and relive the situation. Relive all the emotions: the smell, the feeling, the excitement, even the cold. Tonight when I get home I’m going to sit in silence and project myself to this experience. This tool I feel could be very helpful. Another hint I was given, was to express the actual game more, and scenarios during the game. This could also enhance the memoir greatly, but I already planned on doing so. I just haven’t got to it yet.
I am very grateful for this exercise and the proof reader’s remarks. I know that by doing this, that this particular scenario in the memoir will get across very intensively and the reader will be able to relate a lot easier. I will take all of my critiquing very serious and it will show on my final copy.
Nicholas Byers
September 15, 2009
I believe that the review process that we did in class was extremely helpful. The proof reading of my draft was very particular in what I should improve and be more insightful about. I do not know if it was just the person’s personal opinion, but nonetheless, it was very helpful.
The most important information I got from my proof reader was to show more emotion. I am very passionate about the game and what I wrote about, but I think sometimes I fail to show my intensity. This occasion in my life has impacted me greatly and I believe that sometimes it is hard to write about and express all the emotions that I felt on that particular day. One important method that the proof reader gave me, which I’m extremely grateful for, is to sit down for a day and try and relive the situation. Relive all the emotions: the smell, the feeling, the excitement, even the cold. Tonight when I get home I’m going to sit in silence and project myself to this experience. This tool I feel could be very helpful. Another hint I was given, was to express the actual game more, and scenarios during the game. This could also enhance the memoir greatly, but I already planned on doing so. I just haven’t got to it yet.
I am very grateful for this exercise and the proof reader’s remarks. I know that by doing this, that this particular scenario in the memoir will get across very intensively and the reader will be able to relate a lot easier. I will take all of my critiquing very serious and it will show on my final copy.
Thursday, September 10, 2009
single scene from memior
One of my fondest memories had to be the first playoff football game I ever been too. It was December 2007; the patriots were playing the Jacksonville jaguars. I arrived at 11:00 at Gillette stadium. The weather couldn’t of been more than 20 degrees Fahrenheit. My friend Anthony surprised me with tickets not letting me know where we were going to be sitting. Anthony said, “It’s a surprise”. Just excited to go to the game I let him get the satisfaction of surprising us.As we were pulling up, I noticed that we were pulling into the box seat parking lot. Every parking lot was as full as it could be with an at least a fifteen minute waiting period. We passed the gate and entered a virtually empty parking lot. As soon as we parked the car, we began trying to light a fire in this fire pit we brought. Even though the weather was freezing, we began to play beer pong in our snow gloves, sweatshirts and jackets. What first was an adrenaline rush, soon became early stages of hypothermia. Needless to say the first few beers took care of that. After starting the grill and polishing off a few hamburgers and hot dogs the game was just around the corner. We made our way up the packed escalator to which seemed to be the stairway to heaven. As I walked by the concessions into a crowd of 70,000 screaming fan, I knew I was in for a time I would never forget.
Tuesday, September 1, 2009
3 ideas for memiors
1.Being in trouble with the law as an adolescent and how it effects me then. Also, how it changed me today.
2.How big of a part sports play in my life.
3. My close relationship with my grandmother and how her death as well as her life has impacted my life.
What is it about?
1. This idea is about the problems I had growing up. I've always been energetic and I guess looking for different outlets, I choose to go down the wrong path. I do believe that if i hadn't chosen to do so then i wouldn't be the person that I am today.
2. I love sports. My whole childhood I played every sport i could get my hands on. My one true love is football, but I just like getting out and competing.
3. My grandmother and I were inseparable until the age of seven. She was everything to me. She lived right below me and if she was home, I was by her side. Her death was very hard on me and it had a strong impact on me.
So What?
1. Getting into trouble growing up had sculpted me in the person I am today. I believe the chooses I made were wrong, but at the same time, I could still be making these wrong decisions if I hadn't got them out of my system at a young age.
2.Playing football is a way of life for me. Even though I didn't make the best decisions growing up, it could of been a lot worse if i hadn't had football as an outlet. Any time something is bothering me, football takes my mind off of it.
3. If i could spend a day with anyone dead or alive, hands down it would be my grandmother. She is the strongest person I have ever met, and I know if I could have half the strength she had, then everything will be OK.
2.How big of a part sports play in my life.
3. My close relationship with my grandmother and how her death as well as her life has impacted my life.
What is it about?
1. This idea is about the problems I had growing up. I've always been energetic and I guess looking for different outlets, I choose to go down the wrong path. I do believe that if i hadn't chosen to do so then i wouldn't be the person that I am today.
2. I love sports. My whole childhood I played every sport i could get my hands on. My one true love is football, but I just like getting out and competing.
3. My grandmother and I were inseparable until the age of seven. She was everything to me. She lived right below me and if she was home, I was by her side. Her death was very hard on me and it had a strong impact on me.
So What?
1. Getting into trouble growing up had sculpted me in the person I am today. I believe the chooses I made were wrong, but at the same time, I could still be making these wrong decisions if I hadn't got them out of my system at a young age.
2.Playing football is a way of life for me. Even though I didn't make the best decisions growing up, it could of been a lot worse if i hadn't had football as an outlet. Any time something is bothering me, football takes my mind off of it.
3. If i could spend a day with anyone dead or alive, hands down it would be my grandmother. She is the strongest person I have ever met, and I know if I could have half the strength she had, then everything will be OK.
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